2013年11月7日 星期四

the latest outline

Topic: My knowledge on and interest in Improv Everywhere (flash mob) and how "my" own flash mob is.

Main idea: Being interested in flash mobs, I learn about Improv Everywhere and other cool information about flash mob. In the end, I decide to organize a flash mob myself.

Topic sentence for paragraph 1: I am interested in Improv Everywhere because I have some great impression about these kinds of activity before deciding the topic. Besides, the more information I search, the more interested I have. So I chose this topic.

Topic sentence for paragraph 2: Improv Everywhere is different from flash mob.

Topic sentence for paragraph 3: The reason why people will take part in Improv Everywhere’s mission is that they want to see a lot of people perform some exact actions simultaneously or relax themselves.

Conclusion: Learning so many things about flash mob, I would like to hold my own flash mob.

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